Post by morcalvin on Jul 7, 2010 3:40:41 GMT -5
Ok, I originally had four Characters written up here, but my computer crashed when I used the spellchecker so I'll just put in my favourite right now and post the others later
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Name: Icyeneloniculoruniodyonysus Frostensteikmistscythe, Icyene for short (pronounced Ice-Eee-eN-eh
Nicknames: Icy (friendly nickname), Frost king (official title)
Species: Frost Sprite
Appearance: Made of ice, Shapeshifts, but tends to look like a young man with horns and wings (Wings are purely cosmetic, cannot fly)
Age: 26 billion
Abilities: Ice control (equal to Wraiths), genius level intellect (slightly higher than Eggmans was), superhuman strength (Slightly weaker than Knuckles), brilliant senses of smell and sight, photographic memory, brilliant musician (But has been banned from singing by international treaty)
Weaknesses: turns into water in hot weather (reforms when refrozen), faints when under extreme stress, suffers dyslexia and is a mild O.C.
Personality: Icyene is a major exception from the Wraith series in that he is a character with a very cheery and optimistic view on life. He is also one of Wraiths few friends. He is very shy, tries to be friends with everyone, loves ginger ale and deep fried ice cream. Is scared of Wasabi and suffers from porphyrophobia (fear of purple). Panics quickly, major pacifist (when he was forced into a fight, had a mental breakdown and passed out before he saw the enemy), fiercely loyal to friends, acts as a moral compass for Wraith and stops him from going completely off the rails. Enjoys Billy Joel music. Has a brother. His main goals in life are:
1. Make the world a better place
2. Find a cure for frostbite
3. Eat sushi (He can't even go near sushi shops because of the smell of Wasabi)
4. Set the world record for the most deep fried ice cream eaten in a single sitting
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I hope you see fit to approve this character, he is one of the more developed characters in the Wraith series, I have his entire history written out and his phobias add extra depth. I also added in strange fears because I suffer from automatonophobia in the case of humans and am constantly teased about it, so It's my way of dealing with problems (I give them to a character I create. I created Iban (the incarnation of Rage and Wraiths brother) after I had a falling out with my grandparents) (It actually works, try it some time). Icyene was originally going to have ADHD, but it just didn't fit, so I tried ADD but that didn't fit either, so in the end I made him slightly obsessive compulsive and gave up on finding a medical name for being constantly happy and hyperactive. I show this in writing by not adding spaces between his words. This is very irritating to read, so could you please give me suggestions on how to show he is hyperactive.
Thanks
Morcalvin
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Name: Icyeneloniculoruniodyonysus Frostensteikmistscythe, Icyene for short (pronounced Ice-Eee-eN-eh
Nicknames: Icy (friendly nickname), Frost king (official title)
Species: Frost Sprite
Appearance: Made of ice, Shapeshifts, but tends to look like a young man with horns and wings (Wings are purely cosmetic, cannot fly)
Age: 26 billion
Abilities: Ice control (equal to Wraiths), genius level intellect (slightly higher than Eggmans was), superhuman strength (Slightly weaker than Knuckles), brilliant senses of smell and sight, photographic memory, brilliant musician (But has been banned from singing by international treaty)
Weaknesses: turns into water in hot weather (reforms when refrozen), faints when under extreme stress, suffers dyslexia and is a mild O.C.
Personality: Icyene is a major exception from the Wraith series in that he is a character with a very cheery and optimistic view on life. He is also one of Wraiths few friends. He is very shy, tries to be friends with everyone, loves ginger ale and deep fried ice cream. Is scared of Wasabi and suffers from porphyrophobia (fear of purple). Panics quickly, major pacifist (when he was forced into a fight, had a mental breakdown and passed out before he saw the enemy), fiercely loyal to friends, acts as a moral compass for Wraith and stops him from going completely off the rails. Enjoys Billy Joel music. Has a brother. His main goals in life are:
1. Make the world a better place
2. Find a cure for frostbite
3. Eat sushi (He can't even go near sushi shops because of the smell of Wasabi)
4. Set the world record for the most deep fried ice cream eaten in a single sitting
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I hope you see fit to approve this character, he is one of the more developed characters in the Wraith series, I have his entire history written out and his phobias add extra depth. I also added in strange fears because I suffer from automatonophobia in the case of humans and am constantly teased about it, so It's my way of dealing with problems (I give them to a character I create. I created Iban (the incarnation of Rage and Wraiths brother) after I had a falling out with my grandparents) (It actually works, try it some time). Icyene was originally going to have ADHD, but it just didn't fit, so I tried ADD but that didn't fit either, so in the end I made him slightly obsessive compulsive and gave up on finding a medical name for being constantly happy and hyperactive. I show this in writing by not adding spaces between his words. This is very irritating to read, so could you please give me suggestions on how to show he is hyperactive.
Thanks
Morcalvin